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    Post by yuaito heyova on Wed Sep 21, 2016 9:47 pm

    b]Clan / Character Name:[/b] heyova clan
    Kekkei Genkai Name: Inner spider
    Type: Bodily-based transformation with stages
    Description: inner spider is a transformation kkg witch activates dorument gens in the clansmen body transforming them into half women half spider. the kkg has many stages witch dealing with a emotion first is longing then regret then remorse then sadness. the name of the stages are inner spider- is the frist stage of the kkg and has basic stat enchments can be unocked after long periods of longing
    den mother- is the second stage of the kkg and can be unlocked by will alone it also gives a mid jump in stats
    web queen spider-this stage must unlock though training  and gives a large stat boost 5 drop in charka pool per form
    queen hive queen- must unlock though a tram training topic and gives a huge boost in stats
    Duration: Continuous unless deactivated.
    Strengths: increased speed
    increased strongth
    increased senses
    Weaknesses: decreased elemental defence
    decreased stealth
    decreased aoe defence


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    Re: inner spider

    Post by Kissos on Sat Oct 01, 2016 7:01 pm

    1. In the description, state what each of the stages do, and separate them by lines. A block of text is very hard to read.
    2. For your strengths and weaknesses, separate them by line so I know how many of each you have

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    Re: inner spider

    Post by yuaito heyova on Tue Oct 04, 2016 3:39 pm

    bump for strongth and weakness fixed
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    Re: inner spider

    Post by yuaito heyova on Tue Oct 04, 2016 5:37 pm

    bump agin
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    Re: inner spider

    Post by Kissos on Mon Oct 10, 2016 8:18 pm

    Alright, real quick thing: State that the chakra power it drains increases based on what form you're in.
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    Re: inner spider

    Post by yuaito heyova on Tue Oct 11, 2016 11:17 am

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    Re: inner spider

    Post by Kissos on Tue Oct 11, 2016 11:25 am

    I approve of this

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