inner spider

b]Clan / Character Name:[/b] heyova clan
Kekkei Genkai Name: Inner spider
Type: Bodily-based transformation with stages
Description: inner spider is a transformation kkg witch activates dorument gens in the clansmen body transforming them into half women half spider. the kkg has many stages witch dealing with a emotion first is longing then regret then remorse then sadness. the name of the stages are inner spider- is the frist stage of the kkg and has basic stat enchments can be unocked after long periods of longing
den mother- is the second stage of the kkg and can be unlocked by will alone it also gives a mid jump in stats
web queen spider-this stage must unlock though training  and gives a large stat boost 5 drop in charka pool per form
queen hive queen- must unlock though a tram training topic and gives a huge boost in stats
Duration: Continuous unless deactivated.
Strengths: increased speed
increased strongth
increased senses
Weaknesses: decreased elemental defence
decreased stealth
decreased aoe defence

1. In the description, state what each of the stages do, and separate them by lines. A block of text is very hard to read.
2. For your strengths and weaknesses, separate them by line so I know how many of each you have

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bump for strongth and weakness fixed

bump agin

Alright, real quick thing: State that the chakra power it drains increases based on what form you're in.

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